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‘The Fall of Light’ by Niall Williams


Fiction – paperback; Picador; 382 pages; 2001.

The Fall of Light is Niall Williams‘ third novel — he has seven to his name. Of the ones I’ve read, I’ve come to appreciate his elegiac prose style and much enjoy his themes of love and loss, all set in Ireland.

I had high expectations for this novel, which was published following a wave of critical acclaim and commercial success for Willams’ two previous efforts. But I finished it feeling nothing but relief. Indeed, I was surprisingly unmoved by its contents. (One critic, from the international Catholic newspaper The Tablet, was perhaps more circumspect than me, writing “Williams is not interested in character-driven plot. His people are driven by something else entirely, a sort of cosmic passion, a oneness with the universe, the meaning of which they find in the stars…”)

The story is set in 19th century Ireland. The blurb on my edition is misleading, because it claims the story begins during the famine. It doesn’t. The famine occurs a good way into the story and even then you’d be hard pressed to say this is a book about the Irish famine. The horror of it is there, but only in the background, and even though several characters sail to America on what must have been “famine ships”, it is not starvation that drives them to leave their homeland. It is love. Or a sense of adventure. Or as a way of escaping heartache.

There’s a lot of that in this novel — love, adventure and heartache — and if I was to come up with a one-line description I’d say it’s a kind of road story about a family, scattered across the world, which struggles to be reunited once again. All kinds of disasters and tragedies befall the Foleys — Francis and his wife Emer, and their four sons, Tomas, Finbar, Finan and Tiege — which makes this struggle all the more difficult. But there are also moments of unimagined good luck, quiet successes and amazing co-incidences, which injects the story with a sense of optimism.

When The Fall of Light opens Emer has fled the family home after a row with Francis. Francis responds impulsively by setting out to find the rugged West coast, his four children in tow. He burns the house down before leaving. But then tragedy strikes when one of the party is swept downstream while crossing a swollen river.

This sets the pattern for the remaining 300 or so pages, because an awful lot of things — good and bad — happen to these characters, and you’re never sure what’s going to befall them next. But strangely the story lacks tension and momentum, perhaps because it is told from too many divergent points of view and reads as a series of anecdotes rather than one streamlined narrative. Even when there are hints of drama — such as Tiege stealing into the room of his upper-class beloved to watch her sleeping without her knowing — it fizzles out almost as soon as it begins.

Perhaps Williams is trying to convey too much here. The story is, essentially, a family history, told by an omnipresent narrator — a descendant of the Foleys — who occasionally buts in, reminding you that the story is a distant one, not an immediate one:

The story leaves him and returns to the island. Always the story returns there. The teller changes the lens and the green slope of the island appears in focus. And it is as if the teller understands that the island is an image for all Foleys thereafter, after there was something passionate and impetuous in the character of the family that made each of its men islands in turn, and that this was a trait deeply fated and irreversible.

That said, The Fall of Light is filled with gorgeous language and lovely turns of phrase, the type of writing that is best appreciated slowly. But the lack of narrative drive makes the story gentle and meandering, which is wonderful if you like that sort of thing, and tedious if you don’t.

12 thoughts on “‘The Fall of Light’ by Niall Williams”

  1. Hi Mystica, glad to know my review hasn’t put you off. Was slightly concerned I may have been too harsh with this one. But the language is, indeed, a real delight.


  2. Don’t be too hasty, Kevin. His debut novel, Four Letters of Love, is astonishingly good — and definitely one of my all-time favourites. I read it long before I started this blog, hence no review online. I’m still intrigued to read his other stuff — and have added his later novels to my wishlist.


  3. I have Four Letters of Love, so perhaps that is the best place to start with his work. I had heard good things about him generally so he seems like someone to try even if this isn’t the best place to start. I don’t mind stories that meander but still a little plot movement is good…


  4. It’s disappointing when an author you really like doesn’t quite hit the mark you’ve come to expect. I think using an omnipresent narrator can work well, but sometimes that detached view can subtract from the overall arch of the narrative. As a reader, I’m always aware of such a narrator relating the story, and wondering if he or she is actually reliable, and what is not being said.


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  6. It’s a pity this book didn’t work for me, but that’s not to say it wouldn’t work for someone else. Perhaps I just wasn’t in the right “headspace” to read this one when I did.
    The good thing is that the omnipresent narrator really only butted in at the start of each new “part” — there are four parts in total. But you’re right: the detached view can spoil the overall arch of the story, and you do wonder whether they’re reliable or not.


  7. It is always most annoying when you have an author you love, one of their books which has recieved high acclaim which your looking forward to and then… well, it just doesnt quite work for you. I get a bit narked internally when this happens, thank fully though its not too often.
    I have seen this author in the library a few times and given him a ponder. Maybe I should try his debut novel at some point?


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