Fiction – Kindle edition; W&N; 208 pages; 2020.
Jacqueline Woodson’s Red at the Bone came recommended to me with much fanfare. It’s been nominated for many prizes (including the Women’s Prize for Fiction), been a runaway bestseller and named as one of the books of the year in countless media outlets (New York Times, Washington Post, USA Today et al).
It features everything I love in a great story: well-drawn characters, vivid prose, a strong narrative voice, thought-provoking themes (including race, class, sexuality, teen pregnancy, social mobility and ambition) and an original structure that interweaves different storylines and jumps backwards and forwards in time.
But this novella about a Black American family, told from multiple points of view, didn’t really work for me. Perhaps it didn’t help that the week I read it I was distracted by (1) the never-ending USA Presidential Election count and (2) a looming deadline for a massive project at work. Given different circumstances, I may well have found this story more engaging and immersive than I did upon my initial reading.
Melody’s family history
The story revolves around Melody, a 16-year-old about to make her coming of age debut, in 2001. She’s wearing a beautiful white dress that was made for her mother, Iris, who never got to wear it because she fell pregnant when still a schoolgirl.
As Melody descends the staircase in her grandparent’s brownstone house in Brooklyn, the time-shifting narrative explores all the interconnections in Melody’s family, detailing the personal histories of her parents and grandparents, to create an authentic portrait of an ordinary hard-working family wanting the very best for their loved ones.
He wanted Melody to never have hands like his mother’s. And maybe that was what being not poor was. They were not poor. Well, Melody wasn’t.
Red at the Bone highlights the repercussions of a teenage pregnancy on two young parents and their respective families.
It looks at how Melody’s father, Aubry, did not realise he was poor until he met Iris and got introduced to her (slightly larger) world; it shows how Iris, having birthed her daughter at 15, refused to be defined by motherhood and escaped to college to pursue a better, more ambitious life; it examines the struggles of Melody’s grandparents, Sabe and Po’Boy, who grew up in the shadow of the Tulsa Race Massacre in 1921; and it takes all these narrative threads and cleverly shows how the history of this one family shapes Melody’s values and world view.
It’s an ambitious story wrapped up in one neat package. It’s just a shame it didn’t quite hit the spot for me, but that’s more my fault than that of the author’s. Sometimes it’s simply a case of right book, wrong time…
I read this for Novellas in November hosted by Cathy and Bookish Becks.
All that seems a great deal to cram into a novella. Did it simply need more pages?
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There’s a lot in the book to digest, but I don’t think adding more pages would help. I had trouble keeping up with what character was narrating their bit of the story and I got confused with who was who. Perhaps a dramatis personae might have helped me. Or each chapter could have been headed with the character’s name 🤷🏻♀️
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You’re not selling it to me! 😉
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LOL. But like I said in my review, I read it when I was STRESSED and didn’t have the bandwidth to cope with a complex narrative.
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Hope life’s easier now.
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It’s just the nature of the job. No sooner than I finish one major project than another one comes along but recently I’ve been managing two big ones at once. This week should be a little less frenetic I hope.
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I’m keen to read this having enjoyed Another Brooklyn so much although slightly wary now. I’d wondered the same as Margaret when I read your post but your reply suggests length wasn’t the problem.
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No, it was my poor addled brain 🧠 😅
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I don’t think I’m enticed by this either, but I do think it’s exciting that more books by women of colour are making their way into the world:)
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Yes, agree about WOC. I have bought a stack of them this year… just need to move them off my TBR and into my reading schedule.
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I found this weirdly pointless, though the writing was fine.
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LOL. That’s a good description.
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I have this one and by the sound of it I should leave it until things are a little more settled!
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